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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by spiffybeth, Feb 25, 2008.

  1. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    c/c please!

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    nealjpage multi format master in a film geek package

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    Very Being There (Wilco album)-esque.
     
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    The guy's face is slightly distracting. (on the left, not the art). I think a tighter crop could fix that and a contrast boost would be even better. I like the grain.
     
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    yep like the texture and the subject....the way the bass pokes into the scene is very good. I agree with bhop a crop at the bottom and the right would tighten it up nicely, providing a good diagonal comp to the image....also a strong kick in the contrast!
     
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    Cool shot..more contrast though...put that cs3 book to good use.
     
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  7. spiffybeth

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    thanks for all the feedback guys!

    ill crop out the drummer and ill increase the contrast and post it when all that's done.
     
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    I like the drummer in the shot. Gives the image a sense of being there and not a posed shot in a studio. I wouldn't get rid of him. I would play with the contrast though.
     
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    I would keep the drummer as well.
     
  10. spiffybeth

    spiffybeth TPF Noob!

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    i upped the contrast. does it need more? and because two people said to leave the drummer in, ill post one with and one without the face for easier comparison.

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    Much better! I like it a lot, Beth.
     
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    Better and I like the drummer in the shot :p
     

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