Baywatch!!!

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  1. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    this is the same bird that appeared in my previous photo of a sunrise called "I feel lonely" however the bird turned a bit.
     
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    StvShoop TPF Noob!

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    your photo lacks something...
    bikini's
    either that or it's an uncomfortably misleading title :p

    i like it though.
    i like the use of dof to separate the bird from background, it doesn't seem like i've seen a lot of sunset shots that did that

    a crazy idea- if you happened to capture more in this shot, but cropped it off for this post, try lowering the bottom and bringing in the right a little bit. it would display (more prominently) the sea, sky, and clouds as three distinct bands. then you would have a strong feel of 2-dimensionality to this piece.
    actually, if this is the whole photo, you could do that pretty easily in photoshop. just increase the canvas size downward and clone a little bit, that sea is pretty homogenous
     
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    Alison Swiss Army Friend Supporting Member

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    Have I ever told you that I love your work? I looked through the pictures that you recently posted and they are all excellent!
     
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    There is something truly great in you, do you know that? Your enthusiasm is infectious! Yeah no more wandering just see the sun.. :D
     
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    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    thank u very very much alison and tsien :) I'm really glad that someone likes my photos :)
     
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    molested_cow No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Hey, at least that's a "chick"!!!:p
     
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    StvShoop TPF Noob!

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    a naked chick at that
    where are the censors? :!:
     
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    Beautiful.
     
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    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    lmao, this is how to get people to open threads.... this is really lovely, Mentos!! Nice job! :D
     
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    that is absolutely gorgeous, mentos.
     
  11. mentos_007

    mentos_007 The Freshmaker!

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    hmm thanks all... actually I got it printed in 10x15 cm and put it into my photo album. I like this photo and I think that's the most important, thx for comments!
     

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