Beautiful Girl In White Dress!

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  1. Tim Ray

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    The arm in the foreground bothers me. It looks like it has been hyperextended. Other than that great expression and great shot.

    Michael
     
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    I agree. I like everything except the arm.

    Her wrist is at 90 degrees and twisted. The twist also makes the elbow look bad. Also, with the post and twist, her upper arm isn't in a attractive position.
     
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    Nice photo except for the distracting monster watermark.
    Cute young lady, well lit.
     
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    Turn her hand around and get her to bend her elbow. The muscle on her upper arm is a constant source of pain for photographers all over the world.
     
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    I agree with the arm comments but i also wanna add that not only does it make the arm look weird but it makes her upper arm look fat
     
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    I especially like the lovely background =)
     
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    That's what I was talking about. That muscle is very difficult to get looking good.
     
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    The hidden rear arm combined with the neck twist/elbow hyper extension make for an unnatural pose.

    Twisting is the primary way for models to appear thinner and most cover models (particularly males) distribute a 'torso twist' shot but in this case it has not quite come off.

    However she is very photogenic.
     
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    what a big arm's muscle... well you'll have to pay attention to small but significant detail like this...
     
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    I have to agree with the others, she looks like she dislocated her arm in some terrible accident lol, but I like everything else, the background, chair and beautiful girl.
     
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    Wow, she's cute. But the arm killed the whole photo
     

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