BEAUTIFUL Senior!

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  1. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    This gal is STUNNING! She was a breeze to photograph and had all this cool stuff on their property (an old truck, sheds, an old bus) it was a very fun shoot!

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    There's more on my flickr! http://www.flickr.com/photos/10893020@N00/
     
  2. B Kennedy

    B Kennedy TPF Noob!

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    nice pics/composure's...To me, on an uncalibrated monitor it looks like the skin tones in her face lack detail? Anyone else see this? Nice lighting in all of them, and I love the BW ones better. Nice job!
     
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    she has really nice eyes.. loljust thought i'd share that.. but nice pics espcially the b/w one with the bus
     
  4. twocolor

    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Some of them I pushed a little extreme in post #3 and #6 in particular. I feel it really POPs the eyes. I only do it on a few pics that I want wow factor on!
     
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    i like the high-key action on some of those....it really does make the eyes pop....well done...very pretty girl.

    what;s on her sweater?...little dirtbikes?:D

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    now i see part of a dirtbike in the background of one of em...so it must be...does she ride?
     
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    She does ride, and her boyfriend gave her the shirt that matches her bike! I LOVE the dirtbike pics. I've done boys on bikes but never a girl. They were pretty awesome!
     
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    twocolor No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    here's another one with her bike!
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    no pro here but her eyes are incredible!
     
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    #4 isn't working for me. I think it's the processing.....it looks unnatural to me. I like the serious expression, but something else about it isn't working....did you have to brighten her face significantly? Maybe that's it.

    #5 looks a bit like she's being swallowed by the grass, so it's not my favorite, but it's ok...different. Maybe cropping some of that grass out would help.

    1-3 are very nice - her mom will treasure #2 especially; she still looks like a little girl in it, probably for the last time.

    Overall they are very nice. #6 is just fantastic - I wish her hair was pushed out of her face a bit more, but it's a super shot and very flattering too.
     
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    Great shots! I agree, she is beautiful! I love photographing people with pretty eyes...you captured her very well, great job!
     
  11. manaheim

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    Hm. Well, I don't find her stunning, but that's hardly a constructive comment, now is it? :)

    I think the compositions are nice, but I don't personally care for the "pushed" processing. I know this is a style and some like it, and that's cool, I just don't. I want to see details in the face, and a lot of that is lost. In extreme cases, I think it does some unfortunate things... like in the last shot my immediate reaction was "Wow, vampyric."

    Still, nice compositions.
     

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