Beautifully edgy. . . (maybe NSFW)

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  1. DeepSpring

    DeepSpring TPF Noob!

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    Very fun shoot I had on monday :)

    All comments and critiques please

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    Thank you very much.. rip 'em up :)
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice series.

    I like #9 the best. This one seems to have the best lighting on the model. #3 is my 2nd favorite for the same reason.

    I think that in most of the others, the light just isn't congruent with what I want to see. I get that you are going for edgy but I think that they would be better if the model had more light and less shadow on her. In a few of them, here hair just looks like a dark blob atop her head.
    Just my opinion anyway.
     
  3. DeepSpring

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    Looking back again I agree with you that the lighting is a bit too harsh
     
  4. DeepSpring

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    anyone else?
     
  5. ScottS

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    I like these. One, its not something that is overly done, and it has some pretty neat ideas behind it too.

    I really like the one with the bubble and the knife, but i think could have had a different position.... you know so that you can see a little more of the knife.

    Overall Very nice!
     
  6. kundalini

    kundalini Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    You have a very good series here. My two cents worth, if you care.

    #3 is a very strong image. The lighting in her face and her expression are strong. The other "bits" in shadow, the highlighted knees and inner thigh, but open to the mind is very sensual.

    Hate to say this, but give #5 a miss. The coloring and shadows between the two circuit breakers look as if she is expelling Beelzebub.

    #6 is very cool.

    #8 is very strong and (sorry) "I am woman, hear me roar". Instead, how about it has a very dominatrix feel about it. She is definately in control.

    #9 is the best.

    Cha-ching. That's my two pennies deposited.
     
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    I think that perhaps you're confusing your genres in your directions to the model. What look exactly were you going for?
     
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    I don't seem to be able to see your photos from photobucket. Has that website been down for a few days? I had the same problem from another poster.
     

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