Beauty dish from today's session

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  1. DanOstergren

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    I'm not an expert but will mention a couple of things. First, she's a pretty model, better if she's a friend as well. The backgrounds are too busy and draw my eye away from the model. The "Z" and the crooked vertical lines detract in the first shot. The sweaters in the first two are too busy as well. They also draw my eye away from the girl's face. The side BW portrait seems to be funny in that her nose runs with her right cheek and makes her face look slightly distorted. Also, she's looking out of the picture frame. More space on the left and less on the right would balance it better. You've made her hair the subject. Her hair in the back of her head looks unkempt. It detracts from her prettiness. The second picture seems too bright burning out her face. Why do you have her on the left side of the picture? There's nothing on the right that adds anything. Hope I helped.
     
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