bedroom photoshoot (NSFW)

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  1. goodoneian

    goodoneian TPF Noob!

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    one of my friends was nice enough to let me take pictures of her today, here's some of what i came up with. any suggestions or anything for next time i do something like this?

    (sorry if these are inappropriate in any way, i wasn't too sure)

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    2. (kinda dark i know :/)
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    all of them were lit by 1 sb80dx shot through an 18x26 softbox

    only post was converting raw to jpeg and desaturating
     
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    laam999 TPF Noob!

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    I like, like you said #2 is too dark but otherwise I think they are well taken
     
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    I think they are really good (not just because said girls is really hot). The only thing that I dont like is whats been stated, the darkness of the second shot, but thats an easy fix. As for suggestions for next time, I would say get a shot of her back (laying down/kneeling/w.e. you want) just to mix it up. Great shots.
     
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    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Nice work. I don't mind #2 having more shadow than light, it adds some mystery. I wouldn't call it too dark, because the parts of her that are lit, are not underexposed.
     
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    Those are pretty nice shots. I do like the darkness on #2, and I wouldn't change the lighting of it besides maybe seeing a little more of her face. Great shots!
     
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    awesome shots! Let's see more
     
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    goodoneian TPF Noob!

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    thanks everyone :wink:

    i guess the darkness works for the second one, my initial thought was i wish i had the softbox a little more in front of her. now the only thing i don't about them is how my wall is in focus, but that's due to my small amount of working space so oh well.

    if anyone's interested there's more on my flickr which is linked in my sig
     
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    Great work. I like 'm a lot and yes, she's a great model. Just 2 little things: in the second one her head looks really big (is that me, her, or the angle?) And try different poses next time, these are pretty generic imho. (but that's not a bad thing when you're starting with shoots like these)






    pascal
     
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    I really like # 3. Also I looked at your flicker and the ones with the white background seem to work the best. You should post those as well!
     
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    Nice shots! In number 1 I think the crop is too tight, I think it would be better not to chop her legs like that. Also, is it just me or is there some wide-angle lens effect/distortion? Her head looks a little to large on #2, as if you used a wide angle lens..? Other than that, I like the shots and I like the tones!
     
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    gsgary Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I think they are good #1 may be a touch too tight #2 the darkness works for me, and you are a lucky chap she is a beautiful young lady
     
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    May I ask what lens you had on here? I checked out your flickr too and there seems to be quite a bit of lens distortion going on.
     

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