Bee

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  1. astrodav68

    astrodav68 TPF Noob!

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    I wanted to create an atmosphere...


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  2. deggimatt

    deggimatt No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I like the two of them. I like the light on the plant or flower.. But I think that the bee is a bit centered espacially in the first one
     
  3. LaFoto

    LaFoto Just Corinna in real life Staff Member Supporting Member

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    You DID create an atmosphere. Love the back light! Just love it.
    Compositionally I'd have cropped these differently, mostly so in order to move the bee more off centre, but ... that is just me.

    The light you had for this and used is gorgeous!
     
  4. danir

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    I love the first one. Both the backlight and the DOF are used beautifully.
    I'm another voter for the offcenter crop.

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  5. Tangerini

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    ^^^^ I agree, especially with how Corinna worded her response. These are both lovely shots!
     
  6. astrodav68

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    thank you.

    I agree with you for the bee which is on the center.

    another shot

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  7. Tantalus

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    Beautiful shots, the dark background works really well with the subjects.
     
  8. abraxas

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    Very nice shots. I think a vertical format would have worked well.
     
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    i love them but think the second one could be cropped a bit differently
     
  10. Ramy

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    Very nice! I'm a fan of bees.
     

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