Hello. My grandfather is currently in Hospice care, after battling pancreatic cancer for over a year now. I was going back through some photos in search of something for my father to remember him by. The folowing are from last thanksgiving, one of the last times the family got to spend with my grandfather in a happy, coherent state. Orig1. Edited1: Orig2: Edited 2: I was really new to photography at the time these were taken. I understand that the originals were noisy and poorly exposed, and I really f'd up the white balance (fortunately they were shot in RAW). I know now that there were several things that could have been done "in camera" to improve the photos. What I want to know is your opinion of the edits, and if there is anything else I could do to improve them as they are, considering that I will not be able to go back and reshoot. Thanks for your time.