Beginner Photographer looking for some feedback

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by Fatback, Jul 9, 2010.

  1. Fatback

    Fatback TPF Noob!

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    Hello everybody at TPF. I just joined and wanted to start by asking what you guys thought about some of my Photos. I'm going to try include a little bit of everything.

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  2. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I dont like #2 and #3 composition. Keep up the good work.
     
  3. tirediron

    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Way too many images to be able to provide serious comment; may I suggest picking 2 - 4 of those you consider your best and submitting those?
     
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    Infidel TPF Noob!

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    I really like the book of matches! Perhaps my favorite. I think the fly is a little underexposed, and would maybe benefit from a tighter crop, but the textural details in many of these are very nicely rendered.
     
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    #1- works. maybe slightly sharper in the front would help but otherwise I think it works

    #2- you used the on camera flash and need more ambient lighting

    #3- it's flat. good composition except for you may want to get more of his hands in

    #4- decent. try take it tighter on the flames next time

    #5- classic fireworks. this is a photo that needs a foreground

    #6- ??????

    #7- not bad. I might have focused on the head but it works for what it is

    #8, 9- get tighter
     
  6. Fatback

    Fatback TPF Noob!

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    Yea I don't really know anything about taking portraits.

    Yea I thought it might be. If I make another thread in the future I'll be sure to limit my picks.

    Thanks guys, I'll try out your suggestions:thumbup:
     
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    i think they all look good.
     
  8. Fatback

    Fatback TPF Noob!

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    Thanks man,:hug::
     

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