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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by MyNameIsChris, Jul 17, 2008.

  1. MyNameIsChris

    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    A picture of my girlfriend and her best friend.
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    And a picture of my girlfriend enjoying the swing set haha.
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    43 views but not a single post... come on!
     
  3. icassell

    icassell TPF Noob!

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    Can you make them bigger? Hard to see ...
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Indeed, I can.
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  5. tirediron

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    You didn't actually ask for any input on the images, you simply posted them with an explanation.
     
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    icassell TPF Noob!

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    much better!

    I like the first one, but I feel rather intrusive. You might consider cropping off some of the vegetation above their heads.
     
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    Senor Hound TPF Noob!

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    I like the first one cause its unique. The only problem I see is that the models (you lucky guy :) ) are facing the outside of the photo. Ideally, they should face towards the center of the photo. But considering I don't know if that was an option or not, its hard to say it would be better if you did that. Its just a guideline, anyway.

    The second one is more simple, but in a good way. I think the horizon might be a little off, though. I bet straightening it up would make the photo seem a bit better.

    I don't mean to sound overcritical either. Keep in mind I'm a beginner, and I'm only pointing out the things people have pointed out to me in my photos. I can say you did a GREAT job of not cutting off any feet or hands, as this is a big problem for me.
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    @ tirediron Yeah I guess you're right, my bad.

    @icassell I'll try that later today and post the cropped version.

    @ Senor Hound First off thank you very much, and I am a lucky guy :). Where I was located was as much in front of them as I could possibly be without being in the creek, but I understand what you're saying. Also I think you are right and the horizon may be off a little bit and ill fix that later today as well. Thank you for your input!

    More C&C is very welcome
     
  9. boogaguy

    boogaguy TPF Noob!

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    You should photoshop the swing out on the second one and make it look like she has powers
     
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    MyNameIsChris TPF Noob!

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    Hahaha I'll give it a shot later and post it just for you.
     

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