Bike Builder....HDR

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  1. Roger

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    I like the composition of the second shot, the first shot is too tight on the bike, doesn't give it much personality. Just my opinion. The color looks good though!
     
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    the shots a bit boring and i don't think the tone mapping does anything for it other than adding a halo. Photography would really come alive for you if got some lighting.

    check out alien bees
     
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    Can you tell me what hdr data​
     
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    thanks for the comments....the second shot I was trying to just have a section of the bike and to make the shot more about the person to give a sense of him and what he does.

    Boring, well thanks for the insight, what exactly do you find boring? I think the halos are not strong and I did push the tonemapping a little further than I usually do....I prefer natural light and not every one can or wants to cart around a portable studio. I find your comments dismissive and not that constructive to be honest. This is interesting given the comments you got in a thread of yours. Shooting people is something I struggle with and also something I would like to improve.

    Do you mean the programme?
     
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    I think the shot shows a lot of character & a really nice bike. Good work Roger.
     
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    Nice shots!! (and nice Pan Head!!!)

    I like both shots for different reasons.

    #1) The focus is on the builder but the bike gives you a bit of context without being the subject.

    #2) Nice overall shot of the builder and bike. There seems to be a bit too much brick above him. Maybe crop it down a bit.

    The is pretty good. I think it would be way over done if you went any further with it.
     
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    thanks very much abraxas....he's invited me to go back and do some more portrait work in infrared, of him and his sister.

    hey thanks man....I should have cropped #2 for posting here, I left it full frame as I would for a magazine cover. Glad you like the Pan, I shot a customer's Pan on the same day, I'll post some of those up soon...you should see his collection of machinery, in fact here's a link to his site if you'd like to take a look. ROBERTO ROSSI - MANTOVA
     
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    I don't think that the first shot is tight enough.
    Try it by cropping to just above the front fender, and to his back.

    The second shot just has to much wall. I think it would look good as a square photo.

    If you shoot him again, move out away from the wall, and blur it out by using a longer focal length and a small aperture.
    That is not a good looking wall in my opinion.
     
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    thanks for your comments.....why do you think a tighter crop on #1 would look better? Shot #2 is ideal for a potential cover, plenty of dead space for the header and other wordings...as I said above I should have cropped it for posting here....there wasn't enough space to move him away from the wall, a lot of the time on shoots you have to make the best with what you've got. I agree a plain wall would have been better....I think maybe you mean a larger aperture ;).
     
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    Yeah, I meant larger aperture, smaller aperture number.

    I didn't know you were going for a Mag cover with the second shot, then the crop makes sense.
     
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    I really like these and that pan is so nice
     

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