Bird ((C&C welcome))

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  1. Paige_B

    Paige_B TPF Noob!

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    Not really sure how i feel about this photo
    I like it but then it just feels as if im missing something

    C&C please!

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    The wings are clipped and its in the top right corner.. Other than that, i like it.
     
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    same as D-B-J comments
     
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    The framing is all wrong But I expect you had no choice & were lucky to catch the bird at all.

    If you had control of the framing you would want to have the bird entering the frame, not leaving it & with all it's body parts as mentioned by the previous contributors.
     
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    I was very lucky to catch the bird! Ty for your comment
     
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    Were you bird hunting or beach walking?

    If bird hunting, properly set your camera and keep an eye out in all directions, you need to be like a periscope. :mrgreen:


    This photo is not really a keeper, as you get better at these kind of shots you will delete it from your files...trust me that is what I have been doing for the last few days, deleting. :thumbup:
     
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    The yellowish haze bothers me, and i agree with the framing.

    What I do like is that you have the bird, the reflection, and the shadow. Usually, I only see 2 of the 3, but rarely all 3 together.
     

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