Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by Mike Lamb, Jul 4, 2009.
While I know what the intended subject is (the bird) another person might think that it's the transformer thing. It's too busy for the subject to be the bird.
I agree with Corbin. Perhaps next time try and move the transformer farther from the center, or zoom in closer to the bird (if possible) and keep the transformer out of the picture.
My eye is immediately drawn up the pole to the transformer and then up to the right with the bird as an afterthought. Just my personally observation.
I agree with Corbin , the first thing my eye was drawn to were all the wires and the transformer --- plus, the sky is green.
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