Bird

Discussion in 'Critique Forum Archives' started by nikon90s, Jun 12, 2004.

  1. nikon90s

    nikon90s TPF Noob!

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    ok let me have it.....

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  2. MDowdey

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    i like the composition alot....its solemn, ominous...although id like it in black and white, and i wish the bird was standing out alittle more..




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  3. terri

    terri Administrator Staff Member Supporting Member

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    This is a great capture, to have the bird with full wing extension - great job!! It looks more like a silhouette against that sky. I'm liking it.

    If I had to nitpick, I'd wish you were also able to follow him with the camera so you could frame him in the bottom third of the image, with the open sky above him, not below. But again, for fast work that called for your quick reaction - I'd have to say again, great job. :)
     
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    the picture would be better with the sky anove and not below and would probably be much better in b&W. I am not normally a b&w fan, but with the darkness of the image I think it would help.
     

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