Black and White Portrait of Model

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  1. Tim Ray

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    i like. shes pretty.
     
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    Great photo.

    As you are a professional can I just make a tiny criticism?

    The shadow from her hair on the right side (models left) darkens the eye to much. It almost looks bruised.
     
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    Very nice photo.
    I like the lighting and the processing.
    I would like to see more of her personality in the shot and some angles in the shot.
    Locked straight into the camera shoulders squared is not what I like to see in a portrait.
    She is very photogenic, I love the top she is wearing.
     
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    I think in this picture the straight on works very well.

    Maybe just a tad less headroom though...

    josh
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    What kind of a moronic statement is this.
    Your response to a well done picture is that you would scr*w her?

    Grow the hell up you jerk!
     
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    The_Traveler Completely Counter-dependent Supporting Member

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    Ditto both statements.
    Strong assertive picture.
     
  8. jbylake

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    I'd like to see how many more times you can get your initals, name, and name with dot com on 1 watermark of 1 model.:lol:

    Seriously, maybe it's just me, but it (your biography of a watermark) totally distracts, and ruins the whole thing for me.

    I do like the contrast though. It's as good as it gets in my opinion.

    J.:confused:
     
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    I think some people just go to this site to see the pretty ladies...

    I think people like this SUCK!

    Josh
     
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    I absolutely love this picture! Lets see some more photos of this model and shoot pls
     
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    You're a very pretty girl. Nice picture. [​IMG]
     
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    I know a lot of professional work depends on what the client's wants and needs are, but I think this is a boring photo. It might as well be a school photo. I'd like to see some interesting angles.
     

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