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  1. Andrea K

    Andrea K TPF Noob!

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    do u like it? how can i improve?
    comments appreciated, thanks
     
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    Not wanting to sound rude or like I know what I'm talking about, because I really don't, but for some reason I can't enjoy this picture. The band of shadow might have something to do with it, but also the subject just doesn't seem right for b&w. How would a colour shot of it look?
     
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    that's ok i need all the help i can get

    here is a color of the same shot

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    much better in color
     
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    I'd try to retake the shot when there's not a shadow and leave it in color.
     
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    Much better in color but I hate to say this, but the shot has a giant ugly shadow in the middle. >_<
     
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    Photo in color is better ... maybe because of vivid
     

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