Blizzard 2005

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  1. danalec99

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    A frame from today. Would love to hear some good critique. Thanks!
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    ::10D, 24mm@f8, 1/750sec
     
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    could be a bit brighter... i like the way it's framed between the buildings.
     
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    Your composition is simply stunning. To me it captures what life is like in suburbia.

    I would agree on the brightness, but not a lot. The subdued tones are quite nice. If you go too bright, the whites will get harsh quickly (it is snow afterall ;))

    Nicely done!
     
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    I agree. Slightly brighter but beautifully framed. Nice work
     
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    Thanks everyone for the input.

    Re. the brightness, it looked okay in my home monitor. Frommyworkplace, it looks a tad dull. I should probably lift it alilbit.Thanks for pointing that.:thumbup:
     
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    i love it.
     
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    Daniel! Great capture, I love this composition. I also kinda like the darkness; it sets a mood here, even though it is a tad on the flat side - I like it!! Good work!! :)
     
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    Thank you!
     

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