Block Party C&C please!

[clee27]

This was my first time ever really doing a "photojournalism" type of shot! I was super nervous and I wasn't sure what I was quite looking for. I'm hoping to get some advice on what I should look for in a crowd...

I was nervous at first it's hard taking pictures of random people only because I feel it's impolite but when I do that and worry I miss a shot! Well here are the results please be as harsh as you want! I really want to improve...I feel as if there is so much lacking in my pictures compared to everyone elses on the forums =*(

Thank you so much! And please feel free to edit as you'd like! I'd love tips!

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