Boat on a calm lake

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  1. Moni

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    Any suggestions?

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    #1 the colors are dull and could use a bit more exposure. i'd also prefer it if the little bit of ground on the left and branch in the upper left weren't there.

    #2 is underexposed by quite a bit.

    and i think this should be someplace other than the pro gallery.
     
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    Thanks for the input.....I'll try those in next sessions :D
    Can the moderators please put those somewhere in those sections?
     
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    I like the composition of the shot more in #2. I would have even liked more of a zoom though to eliminate the trees. They seem a little distracting to the overall image.
     
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    Larissa, I acutally kept them as a part of the composition.......
     
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    Ditto, however, I think that if the sky were slightly darker and the foreground was slightly brighter, this would be even more appealing to me.
     
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    ^ Yeap I agree with that too...technically if I'd taken the exposer from the boad I think that could be achieved.
     
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    Composition, color and exposure are weak.
    Needs more focus on the subject, I assume it is the boat. Colors are dull and lifeless.
    The second photo is heading in the right direction, the first shot looks like something shot from a car as you were driving by.
     

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