breaking the bank- Critique please

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  1. AF44

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    Hahaha this is quite cool. I like it atleast. Good job!
     
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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Well done. I thought at first glance that the lighting was a little harsh, but on further reflection, I think it works well as-is. Can I have my fin back please?
     
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    Very cool shot, the pig looks quite bemused. :lol:
     
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    I agree, the darker lighting does contribute to the overall piece. Might've made a better stock image with a white background though. That is, if you wanted to try to sell it as stock photography to begin with. It certainly looks like something you'd see on iStock.
     
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    I like it. But I would get rid of the paper money and add more change. I think the $5 bill is a bit distracting.

    -William
     
  7. AF44

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    thanks for all the responses you guys, i actually broke the pig on accident and it just turned into a good photo shoot... but he is long gone now so no reshoots...
    thanks again :D
     
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    i agree that the bill is distracting. also, your depth of field is very narrow, I would have liked to see it with a bit the edges a bit sharper
     
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    Mebbe just a little more light on the pig's face? IMHO.
     
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    Josh66 Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    I like it.

    I would have been a little pissed to smash that pig open only to find $5 though, lol.
     

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