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Discussion in 'People Photography' started by couchcoach182, Jul 15, 2008.

  1. couchcoach182

    couchcoach182 TPF Noob!

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    I haven't shot anything in a really long time. These were just spontaneous shots, I was kind of going for an artsy feel. Any comments on what I could have done differently to better capture that feeling are much appreciated.
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    I like the one on the left, but maybe darken her glasses up a bit to remove you from the refelection? And maybe get a little bit more of the subject in the frame since there's nothing going on in the sky?
     
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    What emotion were you trying to capture? A lot of emotion is held in the eye, so having her eyes hidden takes away a lot of emotion. Also, were you using a wide lens? It looks as if the girl's face in the first picture is a little distorted. Maybe zoom in next time instead of standing so close.

    I like the colors and they are nice pics.
     

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