Bridge over river... C & C please..

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  1. teishu

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    What do you think ? Any changes you think it may benefit from, feel free to make them on PS etc..

    thanks
     
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    Looks like a fuzzy dark thick line through two different textured light areas. This one certainly could benefit from some HDR techniques.
     
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    I would crop out either the top or bottom - probably the top if it were me...
     
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    It's out of focus... If you were going for a soft focus, then it's just a little too soft.
     
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    i think i blurred it slightly as it was hand held and my dog was pulling also at the time :(

    thanks for all the feedback though guys
     
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    Wish you had left the other for a comparison, but that being said; it appears to have more detail and not quite as blurred. Still a bit underexposed but I like the crop much better.
     
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    It lacks some contrast i'd say
     

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