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Discussion in 'The Black & White Gallery' started by Ricky Ortiz, Sep 18, 2008.

  1. Ricky Ortiz

    Ricky Ortiz TPF Noob!

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    C&C welcome
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  2. Ricky Ortiz

    Ricky Ortiz TPF Noob!

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    39 views and no comments is that a good thing?:er:
     
  3. abraxas

    abraxas No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Could be worse. At least you don't suck so bad that people feel the need to tell you how much you suck. I've had plenty drop off the page with 0 comments. It took me quite awhile to reach the nexus of zero.

    Nice shot, nice mood, but a bit weak on composition in my opinion. Maybe try keeping everything from going on right in the middle of the image?

    Got more?
     
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    Nice subject, but I might have stood just a tad closer to the bridge, and faced to the right a little more so that the bridge was leading into the far left third of the picture. Ya see what I mean?

    Also, on black and white, I like the pictures to be more darker tones rather than the faded greys like here. I would have edited this a little bit to deepen the contrast a little, maybe darken the highlights.

    All in all, good start!! :D
     
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    Hi,

    It works for me. It almost has an infared feel to it. Did you do this on purpose in Photoshop? Try Curves for more contrast.
     
  6. Ricky Ortiz

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    well thanks for the c&c and i see what you mean when you say i should have gotten closer and not had it go so much in the center i'll have ot go back to this spot and try at it again. thank you.
     

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