Bubble yellow lines...

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  1. captain-spanky

    captain-spanky TPF Noob!

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    captured on the way back from the pub one lunchtime just after it rained...
    I love pics of moving water :D

    please feel free to add comment, suggestion and/or constructive criticism...
     
  2. Big Mike

    Big Mike I am Big, I am Mike Staff Member Supporting Member

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    Great texture in the water. If the curb was not in view...it would be fairly hard to figure out.

    Nice work.
     
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    That's a terrific shot! I love textures in photos.
     
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    aggiezach Yup...

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    I can only agree with the other posts so far, Great work and Love the texture and pattern in the water. Kind of reminds me of those inspirational posters you see around office's. Maybe the title should be Don't let your dreams go down the gutter, or something cheesy like that :D
     
  5. chrisfenison

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    I love it! Did you use a flash, or was it pretty bright out already?
     
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    8) 8) 8) Cool! I would just call it Bubble Yellow and drop the lines. Just my opinion.

    Eric
     
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    great composition
     
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    Corry Flirtacious and Bodacious Supporting Member

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    Until I read it, I didn't realize it was water! I thought the road had worn in a really weird way!
     
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    Very cool pic, I love it! Sorry not much of a critique, but I can't say anything bad about it, heh heh.
     
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    tr0gd0o0r TPF Noob!

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    Great shot. I love my eye wanders through the water until the lines carry them out of the frame and into some magical void. (CRAP! I just ruined the only negative thing I could find about this photo)

    I love the composition and subject matter and everything. The only thing I could find to critique was that the photo sort of fades into slight over exposure. Of course it also sort of symbolic sense now that i've got on that silly poetical rant. So, i guess just take whatever i just said as you will
     
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    wow :D :D thanks all!
    chrisfenison - didn't use a flash... it was quite bright out, it had just rained and all the clouds had vanished somewhere and the sun was quite bright in the sky.. it was quite surreal.
     
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    Very nice! I like this a lot!!!
     

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