Butte, Mt. - Mountains

[EYEAM4ANARCHY]

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Any comments/ critiques are welcome.

 

[Rachelsne]

I think there needs to be less sky maybe?

 

[Antithesis]

It would be nice to see something in the foreground to give your shots more depth. On that note, I find #1 the most pleasing because it has a bit more depth.

 

[ashadiow]

Your mountains don't seem to be the focal point... They have almost no detail. I would try to get more detail out of the mountains and less out of the sky.

BTW, That side of MT is awesome.

 

[Alex_B]

yes, that half/half composition does not help the shots .. in particular as you cut building in half and such.

 

[EYEAM4ANARCHY]

I'm gonna have to try editing some of the sky out when I get a little time. I had to crop alot of obstacles out of the foreground on these and I think it made them kinda top-heavy.

 

[EYEAM4ANARCHY]

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Better?