Butterflies and Flowers - C&C Please

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  1. Bugs81

    Bugs81 TPF Noob!

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    What's up everyone?

    Spent the weekend on Long Island and took some shots at a local farmstand while picking berries.

    Any thoughts or suggestions? All feedback is greatly appreciated as always.

    Thanks!


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  2. tirediron

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    Nicely done. I would perhaps crop in more tightly on the butterfly in #1, as the surrounding area doesn't seem to add much to the image.
     
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    Very well done.

    I would crop out the flower on the left, it's too close to being in focus that it is competing with the butterfly for my attention.

     
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    DanFinePhotography TPF Noob!

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    i cant see #1 but #2 is very nice. Great PP, could be cropped a little tighter
     
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    Thank you tirediron and ToadMum for your advice, I've uploaded an updated version of the shot.
     

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