Butterfly

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  1. leejt1986

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    what do you think?

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    To me it seems the head and antenae are a bit soft with the focus point being on the leaf in the foreground. A slightly smaller aperture would have helped get it all in focus and when shooting animals / insects its a good rule to make the eyes the focus point.

    To improve the shot I think it would be better if you cropped it so the butterfly was off center, maybe on the left third would work best. A little saturation boost could help too.

    Hope this helps, keep it up!
     
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    Thanks for the tips! It was a real quick shot as i was trying to not get the butterfly to move, may have been why my focus wasnt great. I really appreciate the constructive criticism
     
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    Nice shot. I think if you take this snap more closer that would be excellent.
     
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