C&C--- A day at the park.

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  1. Dylan-Fishman

    Dylan-Fishman TPF Noob!

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    I'm new to the forum and yup, you guessed it, an ameteur! Just wanted some constructive criticism. Only posting two pictures.

    EDIT: Taken with a point & shoot canon. Bleh.

    My Favorite
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    And one more that's not so good.
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    Thanks!,
    Dylan
     
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    Dylan-Fishman TPF Noob!

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    Nothing? All I ask for is your honest opinion. I except everything from "AWESOME!" to "Why do you own a camera?" just some feedback please.
     
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    The top one is kinda bad, theres no composition to it
    the bottom one is good, it just needs some touch ups in PS
     
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    The top one does nothing for me compositionally. My eyes literally dart from place to place on that image. I'm not sure if I should focus on the trees, or the sky, or on the left, or the right...you probably seem my point.

    The second is a great perspective to take. A little vibrance boost couldn't hurt, but other then that, I like it.
     
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    Let me ask this...what do these images say to you? Why did you take them? What message are you trying to send out?
     
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    I went out shooting these pictures with the intention of capturing spring. They remind me of that beautiful day I went out and had fun shooting. Thats what they say to me. #1 absolutely right no focus what so ever. That's what you get with no manual control.

    Thanks you,
    Dylan
     

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