C&C B&W

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by sfzoo, May 4, 2010.

  1. sfzoo

    sfzoo TPF Noob!

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    i have tough skin. i'm a super beginner. let 'er rip! :lol:


    these are straight from cam.
    T2i, jpeg

    i just got PS CS4 and currently learning from Lynda.com...so i'll be working on some PP soon as i figure some stuff out.

    thanks.
     
  2. Raizels

    Raizels TPF Noob!

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    As a noob, the only advice I'm going to give is:
    in the 1st one, it seems a bit tilted, plus the reflection of the light (especially on the left) is very distracting.
     
  3. sfzoo

    sfzoo TPF Noob!

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    Hey man,
    i appreciate the effort.
    and i fully agree.

    i don't know how to fix the glare in the upper left...further, i'm not sure if the glare on the right(behind the subject) is too distracting as well.


    my own critique:
    1st, its obviously tilted. easy fix i'm sure, just have to figure out photoshop.
    2nd, the distracting glare behind
    3rd, it has good contrast(glare notwithstanding)
    4th, something about that spiral that i feel lends itself well to the photo
    5th, may seem uninteresting...i'm a noob. i take photos of EVERYTHING! lol

    and the second photo:
    1st, the top left of the glass is lost in the glare..is the proper lingo 'blown out'?
    2nd, its a bit off-centered
    3rd, its a bit too centered, lol...i'm a noob


    anyone care to chime in?
     

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