C&C: BW Couple

[Maxxam71]

Hello Guys, please C&C, thank you very much!

 

[AlanKlein]

This is a tender moment that would have been better if the man's hair didn't block his eyes and mouth, his face generally. It causes a disconnect between the two. Also rather dark picture. Catch lights would have brightened up her face. The light tree on the right and light fence on the bottom pull your eyes away from the subjects. The mottled lighting caused by the leaves under a bright light also distracts. I would have cropped off some of the right side of the picture. Nice shot.

 

[Didereaux]

Simply waaaaaaay to dark.

 

[jcdeboever]

Too gray. Needs exposure increase.

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[john.margetts]

Would have been improved by the photographer moving a couple of feet to the right. And, yes, way too dark.

 

[manaheim]

^ all that +1