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  1. volcomstone6

    volcomstone6 TPF Noob!

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    :D hey please give me some feedback t[​IMG]hanks in advance :D
     
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    Lighten, add contrast, enjoy!
    I would like to see the original color, as well. I think the [what I assume is] brightly colored graffiti would look pop from the grey wall and rocks.
     
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    I like it! Only two things I would change are:

    Crop so the upper left corner is wall too. And aljust levels so the image is not so mid-tone rich.

    I see your photos are not OK to edit, so try a levels adjustment and see what it looks like. Its a cool shot!
     
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    i agree with what they said ^^

    i'd like to go to a place like this and do some shooting!
     
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    Same, I'd like to stick a band right in there and shoot away!
     
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    so i should go lighter or darker with the mditones? im assuming lighter cause genie said to lighten it up as well, and i cropped it already so just lette me know
     
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    here we go i went ahead and posted both the original and than the second try of the pp one


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    MUCH BETTER! I like the color too! Now they look more "in your face"!
     
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    You didn't run across any giant mutant ants in there did you?

    I like the color one the best. I didn't even notice the water coming out of the left one in B&W.
     
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    I think the color image is much better than the B&W conversions. There is a lot of noise in the B&W images for some reason.

    Just looked at the exif...

    Shutter Speed: 1/30
    Aperture: f/4.0
    ISO: 800
    Focal Length: 18mm

    Was it really dark there? And were you hand holding the camera?

    Do you have a tripod? If you don't you might want to think about getting a good one so you can do this type of shot with a lower ISO (to limit the amount of noise in the image) and slow shutter speed and still have a nice, sharp image.
     
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    Dagwood56 No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I prefer the color version of this photo, I think it "says" more in color. And again, crop the upper left corner so its all wall.
     
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    yeah it was pretty scary standing there looking into this black abyss of nothing and that drain was at the bottom of a huge hill so carrying my tripod was kinda out of the question and not to mention i was trespassing to begin with haha and yeah im really undecided about the color vs. B&W, I really like both so i have no idea
     

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