C & C fixed picture of my hdr

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  1. SuperThinh12

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    Yes! This is quite good, nice shot of the house. Very vivid.
     
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    Big improvement on your last one. The clouds look just a bit posterized, although if you used Photomatix I have no idea what to do about that...
     
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    You didn't say anything about it so I don't know what your were going for. I didn't see the lat one so I don't know the difference.

    If I were to critique it as a photograph it would go like:

    Framing needs improvement,
    Blurry or out of focus,
    Over saturated colors,
    Washed over exposed overall (clouds, house, grass, etc.)

    I love the cloud patterns and the orange tree! As a tone-mapping (AKA: "HDR") it's not too bad. It looks like maybe your individual exposures didn't match up well enough thus causing the blurry look. And maybe one of the exposures was too bright thus causing the washed overexposed look.

    Keep'em coming. :thumbup:
     
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    Now that's a good HDR
     
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    haha thanks. i didnt shoot them fast enough so some of the trees were moving.
     

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