Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by PhotoXopher, Sep 22, 2009.
Those are great pics. Keep shooting :thumbup:
#1 sucks so bad
#2 made me throw up a little in my mouth...
These are bad for a 38 year old. I think you could've done a lot better.
I'm not a fan of selective coloring.
I think this might be a composition where the reverse of 1/3 foreground and 2/3 sky might apply. There is no detail in the sky, but the fog in the distant background does set a mood.
The subject is too centered for my taste.
I would clone out the telephone poles.
I would have preferred to have seen some semblance of water.
Thanks for sharing. Keep practicing and posting.
actually...to be honest...i do kinda like the boat. damn.
actually...to be honest...i do kinda like the bus too. damn. damn.
You'd do better as a 15 year old
Sorry, the second image did not appear on my first C&C.
The 2nd shot sucks.
Thanks for all the C&C so far, joking and serious.
There's actually not much selective coloring going on here... this was taken in the winter so everything is dead and colorless anyway, with the exception of that boat. I did boost the color in the boat, but the fog and seasons played a huge part in the monotone surroundings. So much so that it made me stop my truck and back up 1/4 mile for the shot.
Shot 2 I should maybe explain as well:
It's the bus I ride to work... this was taken in the winter, which already gives a lifeless feel, add to that no sun and darkness when you leave and darkness when you get home.
I wanted to portray that emotion... dead, lifeless, mundane emotion.
It still sucks.
#2 is way under exposed.
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