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  1. xmikookx

    xmikookx TPF Noob!

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    Okay so this image was taken with my recently purchased Tamron 90mm. I might take a picture of this little flower again after i receive some tip.
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    Okay so i was actually able to stabalize the camera on the tripod so here's my second attempt i kinda like the previous one though for having the lighter color.
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    is it just me or is it out of focus a tiny bit? the center looks a bit blurred.

    Nice shot good idea. go at it again!
     
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    yea i think its out of focus also my tripod actually doesnt support the weight of my camera with this lens so i'll be purchasing a new tripod.
     
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    Yeah give it another shot (haha I just made a photography joke! :lol:), and get it in focus, give it a couple tries then post back here.
     
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    Camera: Nikon D80
    Shutter Speed: 1/30
    Aperture: f/4.5
    ISO: 100
    Focal Length: 90mm
    EC: -3.3

    The DOF is pretty shallow so only a small portion of the image is in focus. You may want to stop down the aperture to f/11 or so to deepen the DOF to get more of the flower in focus...after you get a better tripod.
     
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    I kind of like the effect of the photo despite the focus.
     
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    I think I would like the image more if the center part of the flower was in focus. Focus seems to be about an inch right of the center part of the flower. I don't care for the dead white space on the right.
     
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    OOF
     
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    the re-take is great. looks quite sharp, and i love the "hazy" look and feel to it.

    the color difference you noted could be possible lighting changes or a white balance change since the first was taken.
     

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