C&C my photos please

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  1. Marissa.k1995

    Marissa.k1995 TPF Noob!

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    Our cat maggie got outside and became pregnant, it was an accident. But anyhow here are a couple pictures of Gavin one of the kittens and Stubbie my cat. Gavin got his first bath, in these pictures he is drying off. Thanks in advance ;) C&C please. By the way Gavin is 4 weeks old. Oh and I am using my moms DSLR in these photos, Im trying to learn how to use it still. I am on the A mode.

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    the second 2 are the best. I like the third one the best. I think the first one is a little to close up and without the cats eyes open i would have taken a full body shot of the cat to show it sleeping
     
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    I feel that #1 is framed much too close. You can't even see the full mouth or eyes.

    Composition is very important to good photos, and I will admit that I struggle myself with it sometimes.

    I like #3 a lot. Very cute.

    #2 I feel is just a "framed too close" version of #3, with part of an ear cut off.

    Hope this helps.
     
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    I also agree first is too close ,

    and I like to see other two in color as this would have capture more cuteness, in B/W they look dull
     
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    Thanks for the critique, I do admit that the first two are cropped close. I wouldn't have cropped it as close in the first photo, but if I did not there was a ugly background and light was coming through the window making harsh light on his body. Next time I will not crop it as close. :D
     

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