ArA
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That first bird ... erm ... yes, he's of the kind (as to his looks) that makes you think "Only a mother can love this face" . Sharp photo ... unfortunately too little headroom for his pretty (cough-cough) head.
The parrot is VERY colourful. Focus on the eye, good. Too little headroom ... erm: NO headroom for him AT ALL. Awww .
Meerkat and deer lack in focus, or focus is on the nose, not the eyes. Gorilla photo was taken in unfavourable light, his eyes don't spark, look all black and hollow, but I know that flash is not allowed as not to spook the animals, only here fill flash would have been helpful.
As to the photo of the child petting the deer ... that deer's head looks like it doesn't belong into the photo. Somehow... don't know why. Is it its size? It's blurriness. Can't tell. But that photo looks kind of "wrong".
I assume these were in a zoo?
1- the beak is in focus and I think you should have the eye in focus. The composition isnt too interesting, he is very tight in the frame
2- Looks like you missed the focus and got the deer's fur behind his head in focus. The blurryness kind of breaks the image.
3- Lovely colours and good composition but again, the missed focus really kills it
Actually, I find pretty all the shots have missed focus and ok compositions. If anything, they seem a bit tight in the frame, you might want to zoom out just a little bit.
Some diverse and interesting compositions here. Although #2 seems a bit off like mentioned above. Many of these lack any point of focus. I especially like #3 I just wish the eyes were in sharp focus. Unfortunately you can't do much about the lighting, you just gotta use what is available. Try going on a bit of an overcast day or early morning to avoid the harsh shadows. Good start :thumbup:
Might want to check your gear / lenses as I am seriously not seeing that parrot in focus anywhere. Or maybe I should go get my eyes checked?
The meercat is cool. I want some for pets..