C&C new portraits

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  1. ferguson911

    ferguson911 TPF Noob!

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    Hi to all, some new portraits with my new flash head kit qith 2 softboxes.

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    all C&C is welcome :D

    Oh and by the way a quick note
    I was appointed official photographer for my towns ''show booker''
    and well some of my pictures got published in the local paper!!!!
    I LOVE WHEN THINGS GO WELL!!! ( p.s this is a scanned image)
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    NiceShot TPF Noob!

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    3 looks a little under exposed no? could just be my monitor, its not calibrated.
     
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    shaunly TPF Noob!

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    Congrats!!! That's awsome.

    I think a shallower dof on #3 would be awsome. Maybe something like a 85 f1.4. Overall I think it came out great. Also try smoothing out her skin tone a little on PS.
     
  4. Robin Usagani

    Robin Usagani Been spending a lot of time on here!

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    You need to even out her skin color a little. Not sure why her face is so much lighter than her body.
     
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    I believe it could all have to do with softbox placement, first time using the flash heads and softboxes.
     
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    a 1.4 would be better in studio? there isnt much area to give bokeh as i know of
     

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