C&C on a couple pictures

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  1. HorseLuvR

    HorseLuvR TPF Noob!

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    Wanna hear your opinion on a couple shots. Suggestions are appreciated! I really would just love to improve my photography!

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    The first one I didn't like until I looked at it a few times... I got a strong impression from it. I dunno.... It's just what I thought
     
  2. Polyphony

    Polyphony TPF Noob!

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    Nothing is really in focus in the first one. Also the subject is centered. The main subject in the second one is also in the center. Re-shoot or crop these keeping in mind the rule of thirds and they will look much better.
     
  3. BuS_RiDeR

    BuS_RiDeR No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    #1 looks oof to me as well...

    I lie #2 better but I think a re-crop might be an idea...
     
  4. photonewbie86

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    Number 1 is oof and try and crop number 2 to the right to keep it from the center
     
  5. HorseLuvR

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    better?
     
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