C&C on second attempt please.

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  1. DannnyD

    DannnyD TPF Noob!

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    The first is a flower f/8 1/80 sec. iso 400
    the second is a bridge f/4 1/400sec iso 200
    third is a radar tower f5.6 1/800sec. iso 100

    Any comments appreciated. Thanks in advance
    Dan
     

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    KmH Helping photographers learn to fish Supporting Member

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    #1 is underexposed quite a bit. The composure works.

    #2 is slighty underexposed and feels a bit tilted. Again, decent composure.

    #3 has the best exposure of the three and is the most interesting of the 3 images. It does have a hot spot on the white dome that is kind of distracting.
     
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  3. DannnyD

    DannnyD TPF Noob!

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    Thanks Keith ,
    For some strange reason I do tend to lean to the dark side of things. I will have to work on that.
    Dan
     
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    There is nothing wrong with that either. I am not a big propent of "there is a hot spot". Every photo has a hot spot. The trick is to not blow it out, and compose it in a way that is pleasing to look at. Other than the geometric grid of natural composition, and not blowing out the image, I try to work with the hotspots in the images. I think you did well with the tower.
     
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    i like #2....the others dun do anything for me...
     

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