C&C On these three photos

Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by VltnDennis, Sep 24, 2009.

  1. VltnDennis

    VltnDennis TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2008
    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    1
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    They were taken this morning

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]

    [​IMG]

     
  2. PhotoXopher

    PhotoXopher TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    May 27, 2009
    Messages:
    3,475
    Likes Received:
    2
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Not too shabby! I love the blue... composition seems great too.
     
  3. camz

    camz No longer a newbie, moving up!

    Joined:
    Jun 11, 2009
    Messages:
    1,878
    Likes Received:
    284
    Location:
    Bay Area
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    1: To busy as far as the layers are concern. There's the road layer, the dirt, vegetation, ocean and the sky. Sure takes away attention from the subject. I understand the scenery is nice but it's too busy for me.

    2: hmmm I know you're trying a different angle on this shot but it doesn't really go well in my eyes.

    3: My favorite. Not to busy yet you included the beautiful scenery on this...though I find the car underexposed and lack in detail.
     
  4. VltnDennis

    VltnDennis TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Nov 2, 2008
    Messages:
    144
    Likes Received:
    1
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    well for some reason the images are not coming out
     
  5. Mugen80

    Mugen80 TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 22, 2009
    Messages:
    45
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Mission Viejo, CA
    I really like the second and third photo. Nice work!
     
  6. Plato

    Plato TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Jul 11, 2009
    Messages:
    1,058
    Likes Received:
    1
    Location:
    United States of America
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    Horizon not level in all three pics.
     
  7. docphotog

    docphotog TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Apr 17, 2009
    Messages:
    147
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    NYC
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    I really like composition in #2 but the car is a bit underexposed for me
     
  8. ::trainwreck::

    ::trainwreck:: TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 3, 2009
    Messages:
    112
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Grand Rapids, Michigan
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos NOT OK to edit
    They all look a little oversaturated. The composition in 1 could be cropped a little tighter. Plus I don't like the shadow (that the tree behind you, I'm guessing?) is casting on it. 2 is composed a little better, but I'd like to see a little more of the ground. 3 has too much negative space on the right, which detracts from the subject a little bit.
     
  9. nokili

    nokili TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Sep 16, 2009
    Messages:
    98
    Likes Received:
    2
    Location:
    Albuquerque New Mexico
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    The Horizon line is a little slanted down the right in each, but I do like the contrast between the car/sky/water, I think maybe try another time of day, maybe if you did that you could get some more light and less shadow..unless that is what you were looking for :)
     
  10. Stormin

    Stormin TPF Noob!

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2009
    Messages:
    139
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    Fed Way, WA
    Can others edit my Photos:
    Photos OK to edit
    The car is a tad underexposed in #2, and I'd like the lighthouse to be a bit further from the car. It looks like it might be growing from the hood. Sort of a CRX unicorn. ;)

    Fun car though. I miss my Honda more than anything else I have owned.
     

Share This Page