Discussion in 'Photography Beginners' Forum' started by VltnDennis, Sep 24, 2009.
They were taken this morning
Not too shabby! I love the blue... composition seems great too.
1: To busy as far as the layers are concern. There's the road layer, the dirt, vegetation, ocean and the sky. Sure takes away attention from the subject. I understand the scenery is nice but it's too busy for me.
2: hmmm I know you're trying a different angle on this shot but it doesn't really go well in my eyes.
3: My favorite. Not to busy yet you included the beautiful scenery on this...though I find the car underexposed and lack in detail.
well for some reason the images are not coming out
I really like the second and third photo. Nice work!
Horizon not level in all three pics.
I really like composition in #2 but the car is a bit underexposed for me
They all look a little oversaturated. The composition in 1 could be cropped a little tighter. Plus I don't like the shadow (that the tree behind you, I'm guessing?) is casting on it. 2 is composed a little better, but I'd like to see a little more of the ground. 3 has too much negative space on the right, which detracts from the subject a little bit.
The Horizon line is a little slanted down the right in each, but I do like the contrast between the car/sky/water, I think maybe try another time of day, maybe if you did that you could get some more light and less shadow..unless that is what you were looking for
The car is a tad underexposed in #2, and I'd like the lighthouse to be a bit further from the car. It looks like it might be growing from the hood. Sort of a CRX unicorn.
Fun car though. I miss my Honda more than anything else I have owned.
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