C&C please. Just some nature.

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  1. jerbol

    jerbol TPF Noob!

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    Playing around with the shadows today. C&C would be much appreciated.
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    Now that I look at it this last one seems a bit boring.
     
  2. TJ K

    TJ K No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    I actually like 2. It's simple but dramatic with the barbed wire and nature and trees. Not bad
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    The background on #1 is too distracting for me, the white, almost black leaves and neutral color draw my focus away from the berries. Try to pan around until you get a background that's more neutral or is busy but not with several bold colors.

    #2 is nice! Did you get anymore barb wire shots?
     
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    i really like the both. 1 little more though ;). on 2 the thinner tree on the left is a bit distracting to me for some reason
     
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    Both seem like very nice shots. The first was pretty impressive overall. The second is a bit boring, but technically a good pic. You might run it through a cross-hatching type (stencil/pen & paper) filter on your photo software proggie to see if you get a really nice feel?
     
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    Thanks for all your feedback. I always come away with something to think about next time.
     

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