C&C Please - missing something

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  1. nagigirl

    nagigirl TPF Noob!

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    It has been suggested that this photo is missing something. Any input is greatly appreciated!

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  2. BKMOOD

    BKMOOD TPF Noob!

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    Too many barriers. As a viewer, I can't get in. Let me explain... I can't see her eyes. No connection there. I can barely see her face (but no emotion she may be feeling). No connection there. The overall image seems out of focus, so I can't see it clearly. Another barrier. It comes off more as a passing snapshot than a photograph.
     
  3. mrpink

    mrpink No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    ^^yeap. It is missing focus and composure (not in that order)

    The guy smoking the huge bong in the background is distracting. Crop is far too tight to have a distracting background.





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  4. nagigirl

    nagigirl TPF Noob!

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    Makes sense - points taken
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