C & C Please: My Autumnal Self

[jonahr]

 

[xathor]

I like it!

As for criticism, hmm.. I am not sure about the vignetting effect... Maybe a bring the camera a little closer to the viewscreen of the other.

I can't think of anything else...

 

[camz]

Nice camera man!

I think there's too much vignetting. If you wanted the focal point on the top view of the camera I think you've already achieved it by blurring the background.

 

[Wyjid]

im a fan of the vignetting. maybe draw it back away from the center just a touch.