C & C Please: My Autumnal Self

Discussion in 'General Gallery' started by jonahr, Oct 15, 2009.

  1. jonahr

    jonahr TPF Noob!

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  2. xathor

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    I like it!

    As for criticism, hmm.. I am not sure about the vignetting effect... Maybe a bring the camera a little closer to the viewscreen of the other.

    I can't think of anything else... :lol:
     
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    camz No longer a newbie, moving up!

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    Nice camera man!

    I think there's too much vignetting. If you wanted the focal point on the top view of the camera I think you've already achieved it by blurring the background.
     
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    im a fan of the vignetting. maybe draw it back away from the center just a touch.
     

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