C&C please on this sunset ....

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  1. clbowie

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    Is that a bridge in the background? Whatever it is, it is ruining your composition. Otherwise it would be a very cool sunset.
     
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    Darn pesky bridge wouldn't move! :D
     
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    How dares it!:D
     
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    I kinda agree with mersad. I would either leave the bridge out, or pan up and out to get more of it and make it a focal point. Also, play with your exposures, I would stop down and make the boat a totally dark sillouette and I bet that would also bring out more sky color. Not bad though.
     
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    Something like this?
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    I like the second one better. Great sky color.
     
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    you more recent one is much nicer.
    i love the colours
     
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    YES! :)
     
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    The second one is a keeper.
     
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    Thank you everyone!
     

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