C&C Please, Tear them apart.

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  1. Mr.SuperHero

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    From Yesterday and Today, All taken in below zero weather... Whatever.
    Haha, I'm not sure how happy I am with any of them, But I'm learning so I have a little bit of an excuse.


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    wow, the fourth looks professional. i really like it, but the others dont do much for me
     
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    I like them but I hope that isnt your school lit book
     
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    I like the third shot bet of all of them. The shutter speed was a little long hence the blown out highlights from who knows what...LOL

    The others dont do much for me at all.
     
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    Its old...
    I hope, haha.
     
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    Yeah it was tricky to get the shot I wanted, I only had like 2 of those things and the first one was a dud.
     
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    I like #4 and #2, but the others don't do anything much for me. #4 is especially good and very stylish.

    Nigel
     
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    I like not only the execution of number four, but the creative thought behind it. The other's I find are all lacking something major. The first - the subject is too dim so the eye focuses on the left side of the photo which is boring. The second I just find that your subject of cracked stucco to be bland - no colour or anything special to entice the eye and the pillars in the background are distracting IMHO. The third isn't bad actually - just a touch over exposed - but I found that I wanted to look longer at that one.

    Keep up the good work! Loved the 4th one. Clever.
     
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    I like number 3 + 4. Nice work
     
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    Thanks for the C&C guys.
    I went shooting today so I'll update you guys soon :tup:
     
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    OK pics. #1 took me awhile to finally figure out what i was looking at, and im still not sure i know. #4 is the best. haha GREAT concept. and BTW...funny avatar jamal :lol:
     
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    you want harsh?

    ok. They're unoriginal and uninteresting except the fourth, which isn't framed very well.

    The fourth is a nice concept.

    I think you could've combined the concepts in 2 and 4. A low angle shot next to that pillar with the lens focused on burning book.
     

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