C&C Please?

[Curiosity Cosby]

Interested in knowing others opinions on this photo. No need to sugar coat any criticism. I have others I want to post for C&C but I will take those one at a time Thanks!

 

[Phelan]

Don't care for the vignetting personally and the focus seems sharper on the grass in the foreground more so than on the girl. Massively blown out highlights in the background above and to the left of the girl's head.

It sort of seems like you were going for an out of body dream sequence feel to the image.

 

[Curiosity Cosby]

Yeah, you could say I was going for a dream type feel there. Vignettes are typically not my deal either, but for the result I wanted, it just sat better with me than without it. The top left corner was horribly overexposed, didn't notice until I got home. You are right about the focus, also didn't notice that til I got home, however, I kinda like how it adds to the dreamy feel/look.