C & C Please!

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  1. MGriff240

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    Hey all, just discovered this site, so bear with me. :lol:

    I'm 17 and have been getting into photography for the last few months...These are a few shots from the Philadelphia Auto Show that I attended a couple of weeks ago.

    Taken with a Nikon D3000, 55-200mm f/4-5.6, touched up in Picnik.

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    As you can tell, I'm a sucker for black & white photography. :mrgreen:
     
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    I dont like 3, mainly because the guy in the back, but that could easily be removed, however I also do not like that the vent under the headlight is cut off, if you cropped to that you might re-crop.
    1-2, I like...
    1- the shadows around the outer ring of the emblem bother me, its distracting, you might be able to tone them down a bit.
    2- I like this shot, however it looks like you were shooting slightly above the grill, which the angles of the hood look too curvy, I think it would have been better straight on.
     
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    I definitely agree with the third. That guy wouldn't move. Hahaha.
    As for the first, how would I go about that?
     
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    I might mess with it, see if I can do anything with it.
     
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    Okay, thanks. :headbang:
     
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    Shelby?! I'm jealous...
    I liked the ideas for the pics. Execution could have been a bit better, but that will come in time. Good job. :)
     
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    Did this real quick, not sure if it helps, you tell me, I might mess with it more this evening. Its hard to tell what is on the emblem at about 11 o'clock.
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