C&C please!!

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  1. Kfarlow

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    Your use of negative space is impressive. ;)
     
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    very minimalist...
     
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    I havent been on here in a long time!! Gotta work the bugs out!!!
     
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    There it is! ;)

    I like it, but the lighting seems off - like she was photoshopped into the background photo. If that's not the case, the maybe too much fill flash?

    Nice shot of the girl though.
     
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    No photoshop, but the sun was out in full force that day which is lit her up so much!
     
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    I really like it except she does look like she's been photoshopped into the background.
     
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    Nice job. The image is engaging. The only comment I have is that the out-of-focus dandelion seeds being blown in the air are distracting and look like smudges. If you could sharpen them or Photoshop some of them out of the blue sky, it would be less distracting, which would put more emphasis on the subject and overall composition.
     
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    yellow flowers seem abit distracting. nice idea tho.
     
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    What they said, I'll say it too :) She seems a bit soft, otherwise I like the concept.
     

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