C&C Please.

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  1. Jef.Friday

    Jef.Friday TPF Noob!

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    tirediron Watch the Birdy! Staff Member Supporting Member

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    C&C per req:

    Both images are classic, 'though not especially exciting or interesting studies in depth of field. While I'm not a fan of the angles, that's a personal choice. I will say that while both are significantly under-exposed, your monochrome conversion seems well done. Even though you've used a large aperture and have a shallow DoF, be cognizant of your backgrounds; there is still enough detail in #2 to make the background quite distracting.

    Just my $00.02 worth - your mileage may vary.

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    Hmm, Thanks!. Well they are under-expose, I edit them through my camera, took 'em in Raw form.

    What's a good way to make them look better? edit them through photoshop?

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    It looks like there's enough detail that you will be able to do some reasonable edits with levels/curves in Photoshop, but really, the best thing you can do is to get the exposure correct at the time you take the shot.
     
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    They both look very underexposed and out of focus to me, sorry.
     

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